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What are the general characteristics of developing countries?

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Turkey
 is one of the developing
countries
. Developing
countries
 usually take actions with small risks since any incident that affects the economy negatively may bring the country and its population face to face with serious economic difficulties, that’s why they prefer to move in line with the rest of the world. These
countries
 analyze the trends in the world and act
accordingly
 by taking necessary precautions. FED’s Tightening Monetary Policy caused many developing
countries
 to increase interest rates since developing
countries
 need the attraction of investors but the reduction in the circulation of money would decrease the flow of money which
consequently
 decrease the flow of investments.
On the other hand
,
Turkey
 did the opposite and decreased the interest rates.
This
 unorthodox move completely shocked everyone as it was not in line with
usual
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 economic understanding.
Turkey
’s economic problems were already present before
this
 action, after 2018 its growth decisions were drifting
Turkey
 into higher inflation and higher foreign Exchange rates. These movements in return caused an unreliable atmosphere
around
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 the Turkish economy. Already present financial problems due to pandemic and slowed down economies in the world were enforcing less risky actions for investors and
countries
, so
Turkey
’s unorthodox movements caused many investors to lose trust in
Turkey
 and not invest in it.
Turkey
’s imports are higher than its exports which increases the need for US Dollar.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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