Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Immigration to a
country
with a foreign spoken language
is difficult to
say the least. The social and practical daily struggles that an immigrant face Add the comma(s)
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are
critical problems that can not be underestimated; Change the verb form
is
however
, I am convinced that the impacts these issues put on an individual's life is influenced considerably by that person's personality and the people
he or she is in contact with.
Several valid points are being disscused
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discussed
demonestrate
the difficulty of living in a new Correct your spelling
demonstrate
country
with a new language
. First
of all, human is a social creature who needs to interact with other people
. For instance
, for immigrates
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immigrants
new
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a new
the new
society
, they need to find new friends and expand their relationships, and for doing that the vital requirment
is the ability Correct your spelling
requirement
of speaking
their Replace the preposition
to speak
language
. Consequently
, not knowing the language
can result to
them being isolated and Change preposition
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homesicks
which can Correct your spelling
homesick
homesickness
leads
to them Change the verb form
lead
returing
to their hometown. Correct your spelling
returning
Besides
that, knowing the language
can directly affect finding jobs. This
is because for being accepted in the first
stage of a
recruitment, which is handling an interview, applicants should be able to use their communication skills to express themselves. Remove the article
apply
Therefore
, for an immigrant to find their place in a new country
they have to find occupation and friends which is not possible unless by learning the destination language
.
Despite the above so-called obstacles for
living in a Change preposition
to
country
without speaking their language
, there are many people
who can survive without it. A good example of a country
that has a lot of residents who can not speak English is
Canada. Correct your spelling
in
This
is because its multicultural society
has accepted the fact that many immigrants may not be able to speak English properly. Therefore
, the community is handling this
problem by providing translation services which help new immigrants to be a
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society
member
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members
Moreover
, there are many introverted people
who can survive in a society
without being in contact with others and live in their comfort zones, and use applications like google translation
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whenever
when ever
they need to interact with other Correct your spelling
whenever
people
.
To sum up, it is nothworthy
to bear in mind that knowing the Correct your spelling
noteworthy
not worthy
language
of a country
where an individual moves
to, can help them to handle social and practical struggles better. Correct the article-noun agreement
individual moves
an individual move
Nevertheless
, I believe base on the individuals' charactristics
and the community they are going to liveCorrect your spelling
characteristics
, the
degree of Change preposition
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language
's importance can be variable.Submitted by panizfathi70128 on
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