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Nowadays many children have trouble paying attention in class or concentrating on their school work. Why is this happening? How can this problem be solved?

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Today’s
schoolchildrenchildren
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schoolchildren children
school children children
 overwhelmingly have many distractions from school work especially with the advances in technology and the
internet
,
for example
, online games, social media and online videos. It is undeniable that technology and the
internet
 have many benefits for
children
 by giving them access to unlimited knowledge.
However
, it can
also
 cause addiction and other health problems. Education is one of the most important factors for
children
 to grow and develop themselves. With good guidance and basic knowledge, offspring will grow up as
a qualified adults
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 in society. Nowadays, people including
children
, benefit from
smartphones
 and the
internet
 in everyday life and it can be time-consuming, addictive and distracting from school work and social life.
Children
 practice
smartphones
 for both entertainment and studying and sometimes without caution, using too much for entertainment can cause trouble concentrating on schoolwork and class. In my opinion, limited usage of
smartphones
 and the
internet
 should be taught by parents.
Also
, offspring should learn how to manage their hour by themselves at a very young age. Using the
internet
 for entertainment and relaxation,
for example
, playing games, watching movies and chatting with friends should be within a limited time.
However
, offspring should
also
 prioritize studying and manage
day
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 to do other activities
such
 as sports or socialize with friends as well. In conclusion,
smartphones
 and the
internet
 are the main problems for
children
 having trouble in class and schoolwork, in my opinion. Even though
smartphones
 and the
internet
 can be beneficial and can support the learning process academically, they should be used with time-limited limits and caution.
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