Pollution is becoming a major environment problem. What are causes and solutions to solve this problem?

Nowadays,
pollution
is increasing day by day by industries and
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vehicle and its
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people
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health and
also
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our climate.I believe that to tackle
this
problem there
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some
solution
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solutions
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to make our country
pollution free
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. Perhaps the most important cause of
this
is
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of
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transportation on roads and
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the burning
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plastic
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usage products.
people
use
different
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vehicle
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vehicles
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such
as
car
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cars
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,
bike
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and
truck
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trucks
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on road without
and
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safety on regular basis and
people
stuck
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in a traffic
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due to increasing
of
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transports
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,
for instance
- In
delhi
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pollution
is increasing and
people
are facing many problems and they do not intake oxygen due to bad
enviroment
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environment
.Another reason is that
people
use
plastic
bages
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bags
and more products in their life and they throw and burnt plastics and the smell of the plastic
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our
lifee
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life
lives
and eyes
also
because the
pollution
mix with
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environment
enviroment
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and it may
effect
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more and more
people
to risk their
life
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in danger.
For example
- in many
countries
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people
are facing stress, anxiety and
headeche
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headache
headaches
problem
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and
this
is because of
enviromental
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environmental
issue
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issues
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and they are not following
rules
and regulations as per our
govenment
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government
metion
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mention
. The most effective solution to reduce the phenomenon is to make some
rules
for
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a decrease
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of
transportaion
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transportation
.
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most prominent solution is that our
goverment
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government
make some
rules
for reducing
pollution
and make a charge
aganist
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against
people
who are not following.
For example
-
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Delhi
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delhi
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government make
rules
of even and odd
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cars
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in
there
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city
people
are following
this
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these
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rules
and the level of
pollution
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normal and
people
are now not facing any health problems. Another point worth considering is that
people
have to stop using
plastoc
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plastic
bag
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bags
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. As per
goevernment
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government
rule, WHO has banned the
use
of
pastic
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plastic
bag
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bags
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,cans and bottles and
peoplehave
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people have
to
use
wodden
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wooden
bags to carry things,
this
may help to clean our environment and
people
feel natural and the level of oxygen is clean.
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Therefore
people
have to stop
use
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those products and things which may cause pr
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affect
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effect
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affect
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their health and they phase different problems. In conclusion, to stop
this
problem
people
have to take some
actions
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and follow
rules
and regulations and it helps
people
to follow and clean their own country.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • pollution
  • environmental problem
  • causes
  • solutions
  • industrial emissions
  • vehicular emissions
  • improper waste disposal
  • deforestation
  • stricter environmental regulations
  • renewable energy sources
  • waste management systems
  • planting
  • trees
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