You have bought some clothing online and are not satisfied with your purchase. Write a letter to the company that you bought the clothing from. In your email give detalis of the purchase describe the problem explain why you need a replacement urgently

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Dear sir, I am Shreyas from Kingston

street

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Street

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, Coimbatore.

Last

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week, I ordered a casual

shirt

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from Amazon online purchase which I got

Correct pronoun usage

apply

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today, but the problem is

shirt

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not

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is not

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comfortable and dissatisfied. I explained everything in

this

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letter. I place an order for my casual

shirt

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from

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the amazon

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amazon

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Amazon

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website, and the purchase order is AHJ24889. I purchased through my online payment and the evidence has been attached for your reference. I have received an unfit size

shirt

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, I ordered size 34 and

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received

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32, and

additionally

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light

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the light

a light

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green

color

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colour

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I chose but I received a red

color

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colour

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, the cloth is

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apply

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re-usable

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reusable

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, it is like

more dirty

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dirtier

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. I need an urgent replacement for

this

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shirt

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with in

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within

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a week because next week, I have my birthday so, hope you understand my situation. I hope you will take

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apply

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prompt support for

this

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issue Yours respectively, SHREYAS RAVICHANDRAN

saravanan.ko2011Sat Dec 21 2024

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Coherence and Cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph addresses a single idea to enhance clarity. For instance, separate the issue of the wrong size and color from the description of the fabric issue.

Task Achievement

Make the description of the purchase specifics clear by organizing details such as order number, payment proof, and the issues faced.

Coherence and Cohesion

The greeting and closing of the letter are appropriate and polite, which enhances the tone of the letter.

Task Achievement

The letter clearly communicates the need for urgent action, making it easier for the recipient to understand the urgency.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

152 words

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The Closing

Some people think it is important to keep and maintain old buildings rather than replacing them with modern buildings. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The leaders or directors of organizations are often older people. But some people say that young people can also be a leader. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that the fast pace and stress of modern life is having a negative effect on families. To what extent do you agree or disagree?