A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter • Tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves • Say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her • Explain how to apply for the job

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Hi dear Mary It has been a long time since we didn’t meet each other since we graduated from university and I became too excited when I received your mail. as you mentioned in your letter you are seeking a job here so I’ve asked my friends about it. Surprisingly, the good news is that one of my ex-colleagues in a brokerage has a vacancy in her team. the position is trading in an island’s trade centre in Iran

additionally

it involves some extra tasks like branch’s financial issues, like paying branch’s taxes or having some meeting with companies too. I thought it would be a great opportunity for you because you wanted to work in the financial market of Iran as well as living a quiet place so it would be a great alternative for you to make a progress in your position. Above all them, you have the international trading certificate which the company emphasized to add to their requirements.

Finally

, if you are interested in

this

job just let me know I will pass you to the team manager and the recruitment process will be started after your

first

successful interview. hope to hear from you as soon as possible. with best wishes. MASI

Submitted by mr.rahimi30 on Mon May 09 2022

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