A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter • Tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves • Say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her • Explain how to apply for the job

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Hi dear Mary It has been a long time since we didn’t meet each other since we graduated from university and I became too excited when I received your mail. as you mentioned in your letter you are seeking a job here so I’ve asked my friends about it. Surprisingly, the good news is that one of my ex-colleagues in a brokerage has a vacancy in her team. the position is trading in an island’s trade centre in Iran

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it involves some extra tasks like branch’s financial issues, like paying branch’s taxes or having some meeting with companies too. I thought it would be a great opportunity for you because you wanted to work in the financial market of Iran as well as living a quiet place so it would be a great alternative for you to make a progress in your position. Above all them, you have the international trading certificate which the company emphasized to add to their requirements.

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, if you are interested in

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job just let me know I will pass you to the team manager and the recruitment process will be started after your

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successful interview. hope to hear from you as soon as possible. with best wishes. MASI

mr.rahimi30Mon May 09 2022

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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