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Walking is known to be beneficial for health but these days the number of people walking has reduced a lot. what are the reasons for this? What can be done to tackle this problem

#health #people
Walking exercise these days
gone
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be
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 a part of life.All kinds of
people
 without age bar doing walking in
morning
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 or at evening time on a routine basis which improves the health and mental ability. But after corona
issues
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 the number of
people
 has reduced a lot in
walking
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the walking
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 exterior environment.
People
 transformed
to
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machineries
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machinery
types of machinery
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 and internal exercising
techines
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techniques
techies
 like yoga and all.But the
attitute
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attitude
 of
people
 due to fear makes business for some kind of companies which
dels
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deals
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 with health and physic.
Its
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It's
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 good to come out and walk
on
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open-air
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open
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the open
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 air with a mask avoiding
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the crowd
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crowd
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 will be
more
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apply
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healthier and
intersting
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interesting
 for the exercises.Try to walk alone so that it saves some extra wasting energy on talking and other
loses
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.Keep using shoes and other supportive
easures
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measures
 for exercise.Overall walking is the most effective exercise
in
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for
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may
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many
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health related
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health-related
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 issues.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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