Many countries are experiencing serious problems with their environment, with pollution of their land, water and air. What are these problems and how might they be reduced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In the modern technological world, individuals can reduce using of private vehicles so
the
Correct article usage
apply
land
, air
pollution
and water
contamination are well-discussed topics. It seems many nations have experienced significant issues with their nature and conditions due to these pollutions.
Nowadays, there are some significant problems with the environment such
as illness, specially
for elders and children. Replace the word
especially
Example
can be seen Add an article
An example
The example
as
Tehran Change preposition
in
that
is a capital city Correct pronoun usage
which
about
eight million population so Change preposition
with about
this
high level of population leads to air
pollution
due to carbon
footprint of Correct article usage
the carbon
Add an article
the vehicle
vehicle
. Fix the agreement mistake
vehicles
Consequently
, if the air
pollution
did not control, individuals would get lung deceases
. The other difficult situation is Correct your spelling
diseases
water
contamination that
leads to decreasing Correct pronoun usage
which
water
quality and people get
kidney illnesses. Wrong verb form
getting
In addition
, it has happened in underdeveloped countries such
as India. The precipitation is very low and factories make pollution
on rivers. So Indian get various deceases. In my view, these problems have made
by citizens worldwide, especially Add a missing verb
been made
land
pollution
. When they go to
Change preposition
on
trip
, put their waste Correct article usage
a trip
in
everywhere and the Change preposition
apply
land
become
damaged by them.
Fortunately, these days people are more green and Change the verb form
becomes
try
rewild the nature and their environment. There are various ways of Add the particle
totry
pollution
decreasing, for example
Add the comma(s)
,
it
leads to decreasing Correct pronoun usage
which
of
carbon footprint and the Change preposition
in
air
become
more healthy. Correct subject-verb agreement
becomes
On the other hand
, citizens and authorities can boycott the factories which put their waste in rivers and the water
contamination will happen, it leads the water
become
Add the particle
to become
more
healthy. Correct quantifier usage
apply
In addition
, people can use their coffee mug
Fix the agreement mistake
mugs
instead
of using single use
Add a hyphen
single-use
plastics
cups it helps the environment and the Change the noun form
plastic
land
.
In conclusion, in my view
citizens should Add a comma
,view
forced
their own to be more green and rewild the nature.Change the verb form
force
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