Many countries are experiencing serious problems with their environment, with pollution of their land, water and air. What are these problems and how might they be reduced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the modern technological world,

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land

,

air

pollution

and

water

contamination are well-discussed topics. It seems many nations have experienced significant issues with their nature and conditions due to these pollutions. Nowadays, there are some significant problems with the environment

such

as illness,

specially

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for elders and children.

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can be seen

as

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in

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Tehran

that

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is a capital city

about

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eight million population so

this

high level of population leads to

air

pollution

due to

carbon

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the carbon

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footprint of

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the vehicle

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vehicle

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vehicles

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.

Consequently

, if the

air

pollution

did not control, individuals would get lung

deceases

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diseases

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. The other difficult situation is

water

contamination

that

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which

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leads to decreasing

water

quality and people

get

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kidney illnesses.

In addition

, it has happened in underdeveloped countries

such

as India. The precipitation is very low and factories make

pollution

on rivers. So Indian get various deceases. In my view, these problems have

made

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by citizens worldwide, especially

land

pollution

. When they go

to

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on

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trip

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, put their waste

in

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everywhere and the

land

become

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damaged by them. Fortunately, these days people are more green and

try

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rewild the nature and their environment. There are various ways of

pollution

decreasing,

for example

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individuals can reduce using of private vehicles so

it

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leads to decreasing

of

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carbon footprint and the

air

become

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becomes

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more healthy.

On the other hand

, citizens and authorities can boycott the factories which put their waste in rivers and the

water

contamination will happen, it leads the

water

become

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more

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healthy.

In addition

, people can use their coffee

mug

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instead

of using

single use

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plastics

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cups it helps the environment and the

land

. In conclusion, in my

view

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,view

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citizens should

forced

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their own to be more green and rewild the nature.