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Students are becoming more and more reliant on technology. What are some of the problems associated with reliance on computers, and what are some of the possible solutions?

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Technology has brought about a radical shift in the lives of
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 and invaded every sphere of existence. An increasing number of
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 started using computers.
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 using computers ruins their morality, creates health hazards and so on for the
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, there are some courses of remedies to
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 combat. Predominantly,
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 should be banned from using the
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 as it jeopardizes their character. the internet option connects the
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 with unfamiliar people across the globe through social media sites who might be drug peddlers or terrorists.
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 can solve
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 problem by limiting their time used on social media and the awareness of unfamiliar people to safeguard themselves.
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, radiation emission from the
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 adversely affects the health of the
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 by weakening the cardiovascular nervous system and impacting the visual and auditory senses. To solve
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 problem
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 should avoid the usage of laptops for a long.
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 to the above, entertainment features in the
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 distract their concentration from their studies. Even during their study hours, music and games steal their attention from their studies.
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, during his study hours, parents should sideline the usage of computers by their children for entertainment. Apart from
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, rather than seeking knowledge actively through interaction with teachers and reading books, they solely rely on information provided by search engines like Google and Yahoo. As it causes detrimental effects on communication,
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 should start to interact with teachers. To recapitulate, today's
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 are tomorrow's leaders.
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,
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 in the hand of
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 will curtail their learning ability, limit their potential and prevent them to spread their wings to reach greater heights to embrace victory.
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