Topic: Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Recently decades, the type and number of

crimes

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are increasing around the world. Because of that, some

people

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think that the best way to reduce

crime

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is to give longer prison sentences. Others,

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, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing

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. In

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essay, I will give my opinion on those both views. On the

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hand, penalties and sanctions for

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are

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of

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effective measures to prevent and

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a case

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case

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cases

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of

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,

people

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don't want to commit a

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which has long years of

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jail

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as murder and other serious

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crime

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crimes

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. Sometimes, the policy of imprisonment is unsuited for

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crimes

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, some

people

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who committed no serious

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are punished with long years in jail penalty.

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, there are many worthwhile methods to prevent any

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excluding imprisonment.

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, improving awareness of

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at young ages and introducing harmfulness of

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to them.

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, evolving the compassion and kind heart of children and creating a safe society.

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, decreasing and combating poverty is

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of the important activities to safeguard against

crime

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. In conclusion, there are many reasons to influence

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crime

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such

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as poverty, sudden attack by someone and condition of

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's psychology so only

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activity is not enough to combat

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, proper policy should be taken by the government based on

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reasons in order to prevent any

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and decrease the number of

crimes

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.