Oler people after retirement choose spending money for themselves (on holiday) rather than saving money for their children. Is it a positive or negative development?

Currently,

people

have different views on retirement

life

. I think elderly

people

spend

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more

money

on themselves is a positive trend. One of the significant benefits of

this

trend is that it improves older

people

's

life

quality. After taking care of their

children

for decades and devoting their best years to

the

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employers,

this

is the reward they earned.

Moving

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to a new house in rural areas to get away from traffic and air pollution, keep any kinds of plants or

flower

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flowers

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they want in their backyards, or

learning

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instruments and

painting

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. Retirement is the beginning of their new

life

.

Moreover

,

this

will improve their health. Many elderly

people

feel

loneliness

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, and their

children

have no time to pay a visit because of work pressure. Spending

money

instead

of saving for their

children

,

such

as leisure and recreation, can keep them in a good mode.

Furthermore

, more and more countries are entering

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an aging

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aging

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society, if everyone is saving

money

for their

children

, the economy will stagnant. Spending on entertainment activities

such

as

traveling

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and

purchase

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merchandises

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and gifts on holidays will create more job opportunities, which will benefit the whole society.

On the other hand

, we can not neglect the side effects it brings. There is a concern that without parents’ financial assistance, many young

people

may suffer from high pressure. Especially in those countries where house prices and the cost-of-living stay at a high level,

which

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their incomes fail to keep up with the inflation.

For example

,

to purchase

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purchasing

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an apartment

with

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of

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60 square meters in Beijing will empty six wallets of a family, the

couple's

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and their four parents'.

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always comes with opportunity. Parents can take

this

chance to alter their educational strategy, which helps to cultivate their

children

's independence. The young generation needs to face their

life

all by themselves and the mindset of relying on parents is no longer an option. Overall, I think older

people

spend

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spending

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money

for themselves

instead

of saving for

children

is a positive trend.

This

is beneficial not only to old

people

’s welfare but

also

to young adults’ development.