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Some believe that people today have no interest in maintaining the traditional culture of their country or region. Other believe that it is still important to people that we preserve a traditional way of life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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It is often argued that individuals have no attentiveness to preserve the regional or national
cuture
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culture
 ,whilst others disagree and think that maintaining a traditional culture is crucial.
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perspectives and why I believe that it is pivotal to preserve
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cultural values. On the one hand, there are
people
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 who think that
people
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 have lost interest
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nation
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the nation
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 or regional culture because of their busy
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lifestyle
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life style
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lifestyle
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.
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,
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 is largely due to increasing inflation, individuals are preoccupied
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 making their ends meet. If they want their family to live happily they need to work more
deligently
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diligently
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, they are finding less time for the cultural
activites
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activities
.
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, during
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 most of the Indian
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 in Dubai
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 were not able to travel to their homeland to celebrate Diwali due to fear of
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losing
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loosing
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losing
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 their stable jobs .
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,
people
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 care more
towards
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 sustaining their life than
to
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preserving cultural ties.
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, others state that maintaining a traditional life is vital to
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 social bonding. To elaborate, the majority of the
people
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 in
same
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 regions share
same
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 languages, cuisines, attire and festivals.
This
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 similarity in regional and traditional
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 a paramount role in boosting the social
intergrity
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integrity
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.
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, it enhances the peace and love
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country
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the country
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 and leads to a significant reduction in social unrest.
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, a recent study by the New York Times concluded that
people
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 who respect their traditions have more sense of patriotism
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 to others. In conclusion,
although
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 some
people
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 could not preserve their cultural identity owing to financial constraints. It is my firm belief that one should maintain traditional values for the well-being of
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society and nation.
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