Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is widely held that when confronting appalling

situations

, to accept them is for the best, whereas others seem to believe that trying to improve

such

situations

is more favourable than not doing anything.

This

essay will scrutinize the justifications behind the two opposing viewpoints before the conclusion is reached. On one hand, the reason why acceptance might be the best way to deal with unfavourable incidents is to minimize

further

problems.

This

is because if individuals struggle to improve current circumstances, they might unintentionally worsen what is happening, and

this

will even contribute to a catastrophe.

For example

, employees who are unpleasant with their career and attempt to enhance

this

occurrence by resignation might end up unemployed.

This

is the case that admitting and tolerating a bad situation

are

Change the verb form

is

show examples

the most effective way to reduce the chance of getting in the worst place.

On the other hand

, the beneficial aspect of attempting to make difficult occurrences better is increasing the possibility of improving those. To explain, when people are trying to lift themselves up from bad incidents, it is possible that they could alter

such

incidents to the pleasing ones.

For instance

, anyone with

the

Correct article usage

a

show examples

lack of financial support could try to ameliorate their economic hardship by applying for a part-time job or cutting their unnecessary expenditure.

As a result

, just a trivial endeavour might have increased the probability of improving unappealing circumstances To conclude, having considered both aspects,

although

admitting undesirable

situations

might prevent the worst ones from happening, I am inclined to argue that

such

situations

will definitely improve more or less if

effort

Add an article

the effort

an effort

show examples

is put

on

Change preposition

into

show examples

them in the

first

place.