In recent times, many people are making the decision to live alone. What are the causes of this? Does it have positive or negatives effects on society? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

In our modern world, more and more individuals
decide
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live alone. In
this
essay, I will explore the reasons for
this
and discuss whether it is positive or negative.
Firstly
, I will write about the causes and circumstances associated with
this
theme and
secondly
, I will discuss the cons about
this
. The
single-person
family is seen to be positive from better personal skill development and economic perspective. Being alone forces a person to learn some basic skills including cooking, cleaning the house, paying the utility bills, managing personal finance, purchasing daily commodities, adopting hobbies and many more important skills.
This
makes someone self-dependent which has a greater impact on the development of the country in a broader sense.
For instance
, a
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single-person
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is bound to do a job, business or have some sort of arrangement for a steady earning and
this
trend has a great positive impact on a country’s economy. On top of that, social networks
such
as TikTok, Like, Instagram and etc conduct loneliness.
Whoever
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account for work 24/7 so
have
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no time
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or
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a family. Concerning
to
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the demerits of living alone
towards
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the society,
first
of all, it triggers bad impression from the citizens,
such
as gossiping.
Second
of all,
this
person will not have any son or daughter who can take care of himself, especially when he
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.
Also
, the increasing trend of living alone has a direct relationship
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the percentage of people
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from psychological problems these days. Living alone creates loneliness and depression, unlike the traditional family where there are always others to share someone’s distress and sadness. The isolation often leads people to choose a lifestyle
that is
often negative. Scientists
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belive
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that
single-person
family members often rely on drugs and many of them become addicted.
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is a social
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and living alone is against their natural tendency. For many, bearing the total expenses is tough and
this
leads them to get involved in crimes. n conclusion, the aforementioned evidence reveals that
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dwellers are decided to live alone
by
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several reasons. And in spite of the number of
single-person
families is increasing these days and
this
has some positive aspects despite many severe negative consequences.
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