Nowadays parents put too much pressure on their children to succeed. What is the reason for doing this? Is this a negative or positive development?

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level, formed by their

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the consequence. In my view, it will directly release negative development. There is no doubt that people living in a

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adult. Nowadays, people hardly

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have a break at work and work overtime consistently in

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emotion is

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sent their kids to take part in different types of out-school activities and after courses, hoping their

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to the

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development,

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well-developed physical and psychology during young age, which means will cause internal disease and sick if they could not handle the pressure from the

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most importantly,

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their

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how to release pressure and unbalance when they consistently urge their

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going, resulting

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confidence and

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. In conclusion, the

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the society enhance the child's pressure and it may cause negative consequence for their

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and living .