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As computers translates quickly and accurately, learning of foreign language is a waste of time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#computers #language #waste #time
Since computing devices translate fast and exact, it seems there is
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 any need for educating ourselves for learning a new dialect and
this
 is a wastage pass-the-time.
Nevertheless
, I totally disagree with
this
 aforementioned statement and
this
 essay will explain some of the reasons.
First
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, certainly, translation become easy due to technological advancements
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 modern era.
However
, these improvements tend to be a not reasonable shortcut for us to
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 learning a new
language
.
This
 is because
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 translator machines
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 not have the ability to transfer the emotions
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mixed inside of any divergent dialects.
In other words
, the sprits in accents are not easily translatable. The emotions
such
 as spelling a word in a romantic manner or expressing a comic sentence.
For instance
, when I utilized Google Translate which is a smart translator and nowadays it is available on most
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, it translated my joke
instead
 as an insult to my French friend. In
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addition
 to the above, in spite of the speed and accuracy of These
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 they are not accessible and trustable ,especially in some locations or conditions.
This
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if
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 we would not
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 to our smart devices or with any possible internet interruption,
this
 method
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 to be a pointless way of converting our thoughts and notions to another
language
. Imagine a sudden internet cut caused by a storm, since most of these translators are internet-based so if
this
 internet lack resumes for
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 on our knowledge in that specific foreign
language
.
Therefore
 learning a dialect may be the most
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 option for avoiding
this
 kind of situation. In conclusion, despite computers can quickly translate languages very accurate, it is necessary to acquire a foreign
language
 due to the intricacy of linguistics.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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