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These days, many people have their own computer and telephone, so it is quite easy for them to do their job at home. Does working at home have more advantages or more disadvantages?

#people #computer #telephone #job #home
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spreading
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 of personal
computer
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computers
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 and
phone
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 has made it easy to
work
 at
home
.
Therefore
, quite a lot
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of advantage
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advantage
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were
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 bought by
this
 new form of
working
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.On the one hand, we can take the convenience of
domestic
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 facility to get the process of working more relaxing,
on the other hand
, the cost of transportation can be removed to leave more time and energy
to
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 efficient daily
work
, which
guarantee
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 the
fully
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 completion of tasks in employee’s working period. As we all know,every company can not provide the same comfortable environment as your
home
.The
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lifestyles
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life styles
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lifestyles
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 of everyone can vary so much that someone who just standing in another one’s
home
 feels uncomfortable.With respect to different
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lifestyles
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life styles
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lifestyles
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, working
at
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 one’s own
home
 can maximize his/her power for efficient working. Commuting is always a big and annoying part of
work
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 experience for employees. Commuting is related to many aspects of society.
For example
,
Traffic
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clash
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 can result in
a
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serious street blocking.For
this
 reason,one’s time cost of commuting can be enlarged and get he/her stressed.
Bad
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 state will exactly cause bad performance.So,staying at
employee’s
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an employee’s
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home
 and beginning the daily
work
 with
fresh
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 state in the morning can be a nice choice for bosses. Anyway,there are
also
 many opposite
effect
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for
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this
 working style.But in today’s special period, the two advantages above can cover its bad effect and make it a good choice.If you want to get through
this
 hard time,some extraordinary methods must be taken into account.
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