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Giving children and adolescents pocket money is common throughout the world.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this practice and give your own opinion.

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Getting
pocket
 money is exciting for children and
adolescent
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,
however
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 have we ever thought of
advantages
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the advantages
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 and
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disadvantages
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dis advantages
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disadvantages
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 of
this
 practice ? In
Most
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of
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the
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parts of the world Parents or guardians will be the
one
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ones
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 who
are
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 obliged to provide these
pocket
monies
. If we
lists
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 the advantages, the
first
 one
i
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 will consider is the fact that the
pocket
monies
 will enable the
childrens
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children
 the basic lessons of financial management. It will make them prepared for
theier
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their
 adult
lifehood
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livelihood
 in which money plays a
cruicial
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crucial
 role.
On the other
hand
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 if we were to point out the disadvantages, not every
parents
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parent
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/
guardians
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 cannot afford to provide
thier
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their
 children
monthy
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monthly
 or daily
pocket
monies
 equally. If the parents are
strugling
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struggling
 to meet the daily expenses or to meet the two ends it will be hard for them to allocate to these extra expenses. To conclude, I believe even considering my own experiences in early
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childhood
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child hood
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childhood
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 controller
pocket
monies
 will be good for the children and
adolescent
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adolescents
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.
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