Would you prefer to stay in one company or change companies at one point in your career life? What are the advantages and disadvantages of both scenarios? Give specific details and examples to support your opinion.

Would
i
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prefer to stay in
one
company
or
change
them? Of
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course
coure
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,coure
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i
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I
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would like to
change
them. If
i
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I
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stay working in the same
company
my whole
life
,how can
i
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know that
this
job is good for me?How can
i
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know,that
this
one
is the best
choise
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choice
?There
is
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a lot of reasons for
change
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changing
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the
company
during my career
life
. At
first
,
all
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apply
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we need to choose the
specific
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specifications
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of our work.Maybe,
i
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I
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was born for producing films,or writing books,but not for
supporting
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support
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.I don't know it,and
i
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I
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need to try
everithing
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everything
.I worked more
then
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than
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three years in the store,selling smartphones and dishwashers
,
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before
i
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understood that
i
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dont
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don't
like it.We don't need to
afraid
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be afraid
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to
change
our job,because,it may
change
our
life
. The
second
reason - all companies are different.And all people,who
works
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work
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there are
dofferent
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different
too.I think
,
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apply
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it's
wery
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very
important to have
a
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good people around.You may need their support,help,and,maybe,friendship,and it can make your
daili
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daily
tourine
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taurine
more
intresting
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interesting
,
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when you can drink some coffee with your
frend
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friend
friends
after the ling day in
office
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the office
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.
Also
,it is
wery
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very
important to be a respectable person
on
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at
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the
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apply
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work.It may help you to get a better office,payment,and other features,that you get when your
carreer
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career
is going up. In case you stay in the same
company
,you can become the best
proffesional
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professional
professionals
in only
one
office
,
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or
one
company
.But
i
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think
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thing
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think
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there is no limit
of
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to
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career
life
. Anyway,you always can find something better. So,yes.We need to
change
everything : Job,
company
,city,
girlfrend
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girlfriend
,haircut,
untill
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until
we find the best way to live our
life
.
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