Your friend was supposed to visit you soon, but due to some personal problems you can’t meet him / her on the specified date. Write a letter to him or her explaining the situation. In your letter, you have to: – Apologise to your friend. – Explain why it’s not possible to meet now. – Suggest an alternative date for the meeting.

Dear JOJO, I have received the mail from you about the visit on 20th
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on
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me and my family in your
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a busy
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you for the initiative
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up for the meet after about 5 years. I am really sorry for
this
as on the same day
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had to attend a conference in
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which was
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3 months before by my company chief which
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cannot skip,so please forgive me and really
apoligise
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dear for your concern on me to take up the initiative from you which
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could't
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take advantage.
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a meeting leading many of our
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parental
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clients from
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various

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states and
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have to attend it with my
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and bose.So please forgive me and don't be sad
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us as it's
such
a situation that
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can shift or cancel.Can you please try a visit date after June 30th so that
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will
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he
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available in
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town itself so that we all could just chill up and take those precious moments worth giving
.
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Hopefully waiting for your reply that
its
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it is

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ok from your side as your visit to India
inlcudes
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includes

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both June and July of
this
year.We all are waiting to
met
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your family after half a decade.
Thankyou
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dear Yours lovingly Ulahannaan
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