Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In today's world,
music
has been playing significant
role in human lives.There are lots of opportunities to listen Add an article
a significant
and
share Change preposition
to and
music
.People
can discover new types
and they can like these.Thus
,people
can enjoy different types
of music
and it can bring cultures
and ages together.
First
of all, music
industry has Add an article
the music
a
important place in our lives.Change the article
an
People
listen to music
while working,studying or walking.Correct your spelling
Instead
In stead
of lots of Correct your spelling
Instead
music
types
, people
can listen
child songs or other cultural songs.Add the preposition
tolisten
Therefore
, music
can help bringing
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bring
people
together.For example
, there is a famus
application called Tiktok.Many Correct your spelling
famous
people
around the world hava
been using Correct your spelling
have
this
application to share some
videos.When they share videos,use different Correct quantifier usage
apply
types
of music
and many people
comment and they can meet each other.Thus
, cultural and ages
differences can decrease.
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age
Secondly
,musical entertainments are very popular in
these days.Many companies Change preposition
apply
orginise
events to show different Correct your spelling
organise
cultures
.Parents can join with
their children to teach new Change preposition
apply
cultures
.If they join these events,they and their children can meet foreign people
.Thus
,different cultures
and ages can be minimized.For instance
,there is a meeting club in my counrty
.Correct your spelling
country
People
who desire to learn new cultural things can go there.There is a wide range age of people
there and eveyone
wants to learn something new.
In conclusion,Correct your spelling
everyone
I'm strongly
Change the verb form
I strongly agree
agree
Add the preposition
onagree
toagree
withagree
this
statement.People
can bring together and they can minimize their own cultural level via music
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