You have recently migrated to another country. Now write this letter to your friend to describe your present life. In your letter say.. When you have moved to this country Why you chose this country How things are now for you

Hi John, How's going, mate? It's been a long time since
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time we met. I hope you and your family doing well. As you know, I've been trying for two years to relocate my life to Australia to pursue my career objectives. Luckily, I have been granted
a
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citizenship
last
month, and I moved
to
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here as soon as the visa is approved. I am writing
this
letter to tell you why I am choosing Australia since you are
also
interested in migration here.
First
, the visa process here is quite fast, and it
is not depend
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on where did you come from. It is a rare opportunity in
this
kind of discrimination world.
Additionally
, the
wealther
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weather
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here is almost the same as
our
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country and there are numerous job vacancies that suit us.
Although
migrating to a new country is not an easy process, I believe it's worth
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some point in
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long run. I am working as a part-timer recently and I am being paid more than my full-time office work
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there. As far as I'm concerned, it would be not too difficult to move here for you too. Best wishes, Tun Naung Win
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