Many schools these days have problems with poor student behavior. Why do you think these problems occur? What could be done tackle these problems?

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nowadays. there are several
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. Family should not fight or the bad attitude will
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the student and teachers and schools face
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the student, if the
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advice or help with difficult child
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, it will help
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in the school
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the
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children
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them. in my opinion, the good rising from the scratch will develop good behaviours
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, and help to the family espical to new
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will help the school to avoid bad
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attitude
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