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DOING AN ENJOYABLE ACTIVITY WITH A CHILD CAN DEVELOP BETTER SKILLS AND MORE CREATIVITY THAN READING.TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE? USE REASONS AND SPECIFIC EXAMPLES.

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To a large ,extent people would agree that more the time you spent with your
children
 doing extracurricular exercise more the offspring enhance in skills and creativity. I
also
 agreed with the statement but still reading style is
also
 important to be in academic as well as for personal development. We will explore both aspects one by one and will try to conclude with meaningful justification. During growing ,age every child tends to learn everything with the environmental exposure be in school or at home. So every parent should try to be active with their
children
 in every aspect of their life journey.
Parents
 who spend quality time with their
children
 every
day
 get to become friends with them. And in the same ,
way
children
also
 become so frank with them that they never hide anything from their
parents
. Lots of extra-curricular activities are there which help the
children
 as well their
parents
 to develop better skills and become more creative
day
 by
day
. One of them is block building. In which both try to make different structures like houses, bridges, buildings, police stations and so more. In
this
 ,
way
children
 learn the arts of making meaningful structures and
day
 by
day
 they become smart enough to build whole new structures with the same blocks. So in
this
 ,
way
 lots of other enjoyable activities are
also
 there which help the
children
 to improve their skills and become more creative. But as we know that for professional growth study is equally important so the reading habit is
also
 a part of your academic structure. So to encourage the child's reading habits is
also
 important. So to conclude the point I must say that both are important in respective areas but
parents
 indulgent with their
children
 with lots of activities is
way
 more important than just reading habit.
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