Many people believe that nature plays a more significant impact on human adult intelligence, while others claim that an individual can train himself to become high-intelligent. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In my opinion, everyone can become high-intelligent training his mind and nature
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by hard training.
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humanbeing
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human being
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For example
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. The sisters were growing Add an article
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all
around chess, and their whole childhood was only about playing chess. All sisters achieved admirable success in Change preposition
up all
this
field. They proved that skill is result
of our environment and habits, not innate abilities.
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the result
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Secondly
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yourself
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most
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greatest
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, Albert eagerly studied math and physics. Fix the agreement mistake
problems
As a result
of heavy learning, he became high-intelligent and establish new rules in the scientific world.
In conclusion
I want to say that human cannot control nature, but can train Add a comma
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own
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their own
brain
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