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Everyone should adopt a vegetarin diet because eating meet cause serious health problems. do you agree or disagree agree?

#vegetarin #diet #health
SOME THINK THE HUMANITY MUST CHANGE THEIR
DIET
 TO VEGETARIANISM AND AVOID CONSUMING MEAT ANYMORE AS IT LEAD US TO HAZARDOUS HEALTH DISEASE.
HOWEVER
, I FIRMLY DISAGREE WITH
THIS
 NOTION AS BEING A VEGETARIAN IS COSTLY AND POINTLESS. I WILL EXPLAIN
FURTHER
 IN THE
NEXT
 PARAGRAPHS. TO COMMENCE, HUMANKIND DID NOT START HIS LIFE BY CONSUMING VEGETABLES AS WE NEEDED ENOUGH PROTEIN FOR THE PROPER FUNCTION OF OUR BODY. IN OTHER ,WORDS AS WE ARE ABLE TO CONSUME MEAT SO WHY JUST CHANGE
THIS
? IN MY ,OPINION
THIS
 ACTION IS A POINTLESS SELECTION AS TRADITIONALLY TENDS TO BE CARNIVOROUS. CHOOSING A VEGETARIAN
DIET
 COULD CAUSE UNCOMFORTABLENESS IN THE LONG RUN.
ADDITIONALLY
, A VEGETARIAN
DIET
 COULD CAUSE MANY DIFFICULTIES
SUCH
 AS SOCIAL CONFLICTS. IN MANY CULTURES EATING MEAT IS ACCEPTED AND PEOPLE DO NOT HAVE ENOUGH INFORMATION ABOUT VEGETARIANISM SO WHICH LEAD THE PERSON TO FAMILY CONFLICT.
IN ADDITION
 TO THE POINTS BELOW, VEGETARIANISM IS COSTLY. BECAUSE IN
THIS
 RUSHED WORLD ACCESS TO A FOOD SOURCE IS AN IMPORTANT FACTOR, VEGETARIANS OFTEN FACE MAJOR CHALLENGES IN FINDING VEGETARIAN AVAILABLE FOODS AND BECAUSE OF
THIS
 SCARE OF VEGETARIAN ,
FOOD
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,FOOD
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 THEY ARE EXPENSIVE. EVEN THOUGH THESE KINDS OF FOOD ARE EASY TO MAKE BUT
AS A RESULT
 OF LESS DEMAND THEY ARE SOLD AT HIGH PRICES IF A PERSON COULD FIND THEM AT THEMBUY. FOR ,INSTANCE MANY OF VEGETARIAN INDIVIDUALS FACE PLENTY OF PROBLEMS WHEN THEY TRAVEL SINCE IN SOME COUNTRIES VEGETARIAN IS LIKE A JUKE SO OR THEY SHOULD SPEND HAIGH AMOUNT OF MONEY ON A DISH OF VEGETABLE OR THEY STARVE TO DEATH. IN CONCLUSION, SOME DICTATE THAT EVERYONE HAVE TO CHANGE THEIR
DIET
 TO VEGETARIAN.
NEVERTHELESS
, I AND MANY OTHERS TOTALLY DISAGREE WITH
THIS
 OPINION. b1 uncomfortable/ costly/ pointless b2 travel/
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