In the past shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby. To what extent do you think this is positive trend?

It is true that nowadays visiting malls and purchasing different kinds of tools or clothes is becoming a hobby,

while

Linking Words

in the past it was just an obligatory household task. Some critics

maybe

Correct your spelling

may

show examples

disagree with me, but I totally believe that it is a negative change in people's attitudes.

To begin

Linking Words

with, the first reason why I hold

this

Linking Words

opinion is that

this

Linking Words

kind of fun requires plenty of time.

In other words

Linking Words

,

doing

Correct word choice

while doing

show examples

shopping individual can seek a particular type of product for hours and still be unsuccessful, which

a

Add a missing verb

is a

show examples

losing a day on its own but there are communities of shopaholics all over the world, participants of

which

Correct pronoun usage

who

show examples

share

this

Linking Words

interest and can do it on regular basis.

For instance

Linking Words

,

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

last

Linking Words

week the worldwide TV channel Euronews showed an average time for shopping allocated each year by ordinary women in Dubai, the researchers showed

this

Linking Words

action covered a third of a year for most of the candidates.

In addition

Linking Words

,

this

Linking Words

amusement is a way of using resources

on

Change preposition

for

show examples

unnecessary things. To visit shopping centres and make purchases regularly a person should have a great deal of money. If the person does have a big amount of capital it is unnecessary to spend money on a variety of clothing or tools several times a week.

For example

Linking Words

, most of the shopaholics in my country used to wear one wing or dress only once and

do

Unnecessary verb

apply

show examples

not repeat the same never, which leads people to overestimate themselves among others. In conclusion, shopping is a kind of wasteful attraction for both time and money. In my opinion, people can use these resources in many more beneficial ways, so I fully reject the idea that shopping should become a hobby.