Being a celebrity-such as film star or sports personality-brings problems as well as benefits. do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?

The figure shows the
consumption
of fast food by Australian Teenagers from 1975 to 2000. In general, the
consumption
of hamburgers and pizza has increased a lot from less than 20
times
per
year
to more than 80 or even 100
times
per
year
.
However
,
fish
and
chips
has
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have
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experienced a rapid decrease from about 100
times
per
year
to less than 40
times
per
year
. The
consumption
of
fish
and
chips
has
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had
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a brief rise between 1980 and 1985,
while
it
continues
Wrong verb form
has continued
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to decline since
then
. 1985 is
also
the time when the
consumption
relationship between
fish
and two other junk foods changed. Before 1985, teenagers
eat
Wrong verb form
ate
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more
fish
and
chips
,
then
they
prefer
Wrong verb form
preferred
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hamburgers to the previous 2 kinds of junk food and at about 1990 the
consumption
of hamburgers
also
overtook
the
Correct article usage
apply
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fish
and
chips
.
Besides
, pizza
consumption
grew faster and faster until it
leveled
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levelled
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off after 1995 and hamburger growth gradually slowed down and
it
Correct pronoun usage
apply
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also
stabilized around 1995. From the trend in the figure, the
fish
are most likely to continue to decline.
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