Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue?

#world #measures #governments #individuals

Governments should take the global warming issue seriously, educate people about the problem and regulate policies to reduce global warming and stop destroying our world,

for instance

, using more renewable energy

such

as solar panels, banning cutting down the forests, forbidding or reducing manufacturing and construction, banning private fuel cars and improving the public transportation network. Everyone can

also

help by planting more trees, using less electricity and water, recycling paper and plastic, travelling by public transportation, etc.

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coherence cohesion

Your essay shows a good understanding of the causes of global warming and suggests relevant measures that governments and individuals can take to tackle the issue. However, the ideas could be expressed in a more organized and cohesive manner.

task achievement

You have addressed the task and presented relevant ideas about the causes of global warming and the measures that can be taken to tackle the issue. However, you could further develop your ideas and provide more specific examples to support your points.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

1 paragraphs

78 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

global issue
severity
urgency
greenhouse effect
human-induced
deforestation
fossil fuel combustion
industrial pollution
environmental regulations
emission standards
renewable energy sources
green technologies
international cooperation
Paris Agreement
climate change
energy consumption
public transportation
recycling
eco-friendly
extreme weather conditions
biodiversity
economic stability
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Include an introduction and conclusion

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