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Write about the following topic: Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

#topic #rubbish #governments #amount
The two maps illustrate how the
road
 access to a
city
 hospital, which is located on the north of a
city
road
, changed during a 3-year period from 2900 to1000. Overall, the roads around the
city
 hospital underwent a dramatic change over these 3 years. Not only the parking area for cars was enlarged, but
also
 the designs of
bus
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the bus
a bus
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stop
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stops
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 and the
road
connected
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connecting
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 the hospital and
city
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the city
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road
 became greatly different from the
situations
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situation
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 in 2008. The most notable change is about the
road
 that combines the ring
road
 circling the hospital and the
city
road
 which is on the right south of the hospital. The
road
, originally being totally straight, was added with 2 roundabouts at its 2 ends, but still being the connection between the ring
road
 and
city
road
.
Besides
, the newly
contructed
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constructed
 bus station, the substitute
of
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for
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 those 4 bus stops back in 2003, was
also
 accessible to the 2 roundabouts. Apart from these, the
single car
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 park for both staff and public
hwich
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which
 was on the right of the hospital
road
, developed
to
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into
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 2 parts in 2020: One part was still on the former site for the staff. Another section was built on the right of the hospital, crossing the ring
road
. With its large parking area,
this
 section was able to park plenty of public cars.
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumerism
  • sustainability
  • landfill
  • recycle
  • single-use products
  • waste management
  • regulatory measures
  • composting
  • biodegradable
  • environmental impact
  • incentives
  • sustainable practices
  • circular economy
  • zero waste
  • responsibility
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