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Why do you think social skills are now being emphasized by companies during the recruitment process? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

#skills #companies #recruitment #process #support
Everyone hears about
this
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 term "social
skills
" but why it is so important nowadays? I think that we need to understand what it is and how people use it in professional life and
work
. Let's
work
 it out.
First
 of all, social
skills
 are really essential during the recruitment process because time is changing and
companies
 search not
only
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an only
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professional
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for professional
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worker
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workers
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 but
also
sociable
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. In order to
undertstand
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understand
 why these
skills
 are so important, we need to know what they are. I believe that person should be flexible, sociable, outgoing, open-minded and friendly. There are a
lot
 more but I would like to point out only the main features.
Secondly
, in our fast-moving world , we have to admit that
companies
 change their recruitment policy and
provide
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 new standards. So there are a
lot
 of modern
job
 positions
when
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where
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 a person should present not only
techincal
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technical
skills
, for
exmple
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example
, but
also
 show that they are good team players and can be universal workers.
For example
, when I had the interview with HR in Clario company, she ,
firstly
, asked me about soft
skills
such
 as how I can communicate with people, if it is OK for me to
work
 in
team
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, or if I'm ready to learn more. . I think these questions were more important rather
then
 technical ones.
Thirdly
, a
lot
 of
companies
work
 with customers now,
expecially
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especially
 IT
companies
. In
this
 case,
socail
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social
skills
 are really useful
becaseu
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because
 even from my experience there are
lot
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 of cases when you don't know how to fix the problem but you are able to reassure
customer
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the customer
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,
bring
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and bring
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 the situation under control only with simple words and techniques that include these social
skills
.
On the other hand
, there are introverts. They can be extremely professional workers but the lack of social
skills
 is their serious drawback. What is more interesting,
such
 people often can't find
job
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a job
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 and need always to enhance these
skills
. But no need to worry about them, nowadays, there
are
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 a great range of
job
 positions and everyone is able to find something appropriate. To sum up, I can't exclude that sometimes professional
skills
 are more important
then
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 social but our world has changed so in order to get a good
job
 we need to improve ourselves to be a real
specialist
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specialists
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.
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