A friend of yours is thinking about appliying for the same course that you did at the university. He/She has asked for your advice about studying this subject. write a letter to your friend. In your letter Give details of the course you took at the university. Expalin why you recommend the university. Give some advice about how to apply.

Dear
sam
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, I hope you and your family are well. I am studying in B A
first
smester
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in
university
, l
am chose
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the history subject in my B A course. I think that it is
good
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course and very
help
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for future
job related
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. I will advise you are choosing
this
course it benefits for master
digre
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degree

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also
.
Moreover
, l was the recommended
this
university
because it near my home town and
lot
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of facilities in the
university
such
parking and canteen
also
and the other
think
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that teachers are
also
helping to difficulty in the class by education relatives.
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, l
was apply
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by
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internet
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threw by official website
on
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the
university
. You
are come
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my home and
i
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I

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will help you for admission because it
get
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lot
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of proof by students relative documents and
mention
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the
university
students id card in the document. I am looking forward
too
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seen
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soon
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. Thankfully , You Lovingly, Dharambir
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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