It is not necessary for people to travel to other places to learn about the culture. We can learn as much as from books, films, and the Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays,
people
can
travel
to many countries due to the industrial revolution which accelerated the development of technology.
Although
we can gain knowledge from books, films, and online, I think
travel
to
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country can help
people
learn deeply about the
culture
.
To begin
with, the best way to learn about
foreign
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a foreign
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culture
is to
travel
there and experience the
live
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. Visitors can eat delicacies and enjoy
local
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a local
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dance with residents, whereas it is impossible to experience these activities online or through
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.
For example
, I
traveled
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to Thailand three years ago. Within the palace, I saw residents show their respect to their emperor. It is hard for
people
who live in
democratic
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a democratic
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country
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countries
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to realize why they
honor
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their
leader
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so much.
In addition
, it is a quite different experience to see famous
architectures
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such
as the Great Wall and Taj Mahal just in front of you. Some
people
may be astonished by how historical the wall is or how gigantic the palace is.
For instance
, I used to visit the Forbidden City and I could not believe how enormous it is. When I stood under the stairs of the main palace, I felt like I was so tiny.
People
cannot feel
this
feeling through flat pictures. Indeed, it is cheaper to learn about the
culture
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books, films, and online than
travel
to other countries.
However
, some local traditions may not appear
on
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publications or online.
For example
, for many Asians,
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festival is the date for gathering family members and for eating moon cakes together, while for Taiwanese, we go for barbequing with our family members.
This
unique tradition can only be found in Taiwan. To sum up, I firmly disagree with the statement that
travel
is not necessary for
people
to learn about the
culture
. For me, local experiences cannot be substituted by some publications, movies, and the Internet.
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  • cultural immersion
  • authentic experiences
  • diverse perspectives
  • comprehensive
  • historical context
  • facilitates
  • sensory and emotional depth
  • holistic understanding
  • cultural bias
  • stereotypes
  • discernment
  • virtual reality
  • convenience of access
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