Some sports are considered extremely dangerous, but many people still like them. Why do people take part in dangerous sports? Give some suggestions on how to deal with these dangers.

Sport is the medium which connects two persons irrespective of their caste or creed. In the ancient era, human beings use to play various types of
games
in different parts of the world. Some of them are very enjoyable but very dangerous
also
, that even lead to someone's death but still that never stops the spirit of that game. Same vibes are running in the current generation which never get back with the fear of
risk
in a particular game. If we can remember the golden era of Romans, where they used to fight with swords and lots of instruments which eventually kills the opponent on the spot.
Instead
of holding the player back to do so, the crowd used to cheer for the player. The Emperor's used to organise those kinds of
games
to entertain the public so that they can enjoy and get some time from their boring life. In the current situation, those kinds of
games
are not there but lots of
games
have evolved with time and are dangerous even after taking so many precautions. A few examples, to take names are Boxing,Car-Bike racing,Wrestling and even in each sport there is a kind of
risk
is there but not as dangerous as named
initially
. People like dangerous
games
because it gives them thrills. They become bored with their routine daily life so they search for some extra-ordinary entertainment. In search of that, they like the
games
which involve the maximum
risk
. And the person participating in those
games
, simply to earn more and more many. More the
risk
, maximum the money. To conclude the point, we can recommend the government that these kinds of dangerous
games
should be played with extra precautions and the players should give extra benefits, even to their families if something happens to them during the game.
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