You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell him how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter •say how you feel about his performance •give details of your musical activities •explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities

Dear Dave, How've you been? It's been a while since we
last
met. I hope you and your family doing well. As you know, I have been
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forming a band, especially
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concert singing. Lately, I am really into
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singer
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the concert that I have recently been attending. To tell you the truth, his tone of voice and facial expression are fabulous and
extra-ordinary
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. To be honest, I had been dazzled by his performance and vocal power. Since
then
, I always wanted to go there every weekend and enjoy his session. I was wondering if you could come and visit him with me. The concert is always opened on every
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from 6 in the evening to midnight. If you asked me, I would say I want him to join my upcoming band as a singer. I would appreciate it if you could suggest my idea. It seems like a viable option for me as we are lack of vocal specialist in our team,
although
he may reject it. Best wishes, Tun Naung Win
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