You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centers in your country all look very similar to each other. you don't fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter say which points in the article you agree with explain ways in which your town center is different from most other town centers offer to give guided tour of your town to the writer of the article

Dear Sir, Hope
this
letter finds you well! I recently came across a column written by you in an esteemed newspaper. It was about the architecture of the common buildings in our country . You have
also
described the design aspects and
also
included historical references. I really enjoyed reading it and found it extremely insightful. You have
also
mentioned about the city centres that you find them really alike. I feel that your opinion is partially right. They are quite
same
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the same

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in style in the northern region and
also
somewhat in the western part of the country. But the ones in the east and south are hugely different.
Additionally
, not just the style of the buildings but they
also
differ in the additional facilities that some of them have, which I found was overlooked.
Furthermore
, the centre in my place has been newly constructed and is bigger compared to others. It
also
has one more facility adjacent to it for the people in need and has been constructed to make it more accessible to folks with disabilities. I would love to give you a tour to show you how different it is. I have been an admirer of the way you present your views and always follow your pieces in magazines and on social media. I would truly appreciate
if
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it if

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you could accept my invitation. Looking forward to hearing from you. Regards, Anne
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