You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centers in your country all look very similar to each other. you don't fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter say which points in the article you agree with explain ways in which your town center is different from most other town centers offer to give guided tour of your town to the writer of the article

Dear Sir, Hope

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letter finds you well! I recently came across a column written by you in an esteemed newspaper. It was about the architecture of the common buildings in our country . You have

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described the design aspects and

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included historical references. I really enjoyed reading it and found it extremely insightful. You have

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mentioned about the city centres that you find them really alike. I feel that your opinion is partially right. They are quite

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in style in the northern region and

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somewhat in the western part of the country. But the ones in the east and south are hugely different.

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, not just the style of the buildings but they

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differ in the additional facilities that some of them have, which I found was overlooked.

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, the centre in my place has been newly constructed and is bigger compared to others. It

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has one more facility adjacent to it for the people in need and has been constructed to make it more accessible to folks with disabilities. I would love to give you a tour to show you how different it is. I have been an admirer of the way you present your views and always follow your pieces in magazines and on social media. I would truly appreciate

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you could accept my invitation. Looking forward to hearing from you. Regards, Anne

shatakshi117

May 11, 2022

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

234 words

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