Children can learn effectively by watching television. Therefore they should be encouraged to watch television regularly at home and at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe
kids
will have the ability to learn more effectively by watching TV
and should therefore
be more
encouraged to watch more of it regularly at their private Correct quantifier usage
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residence
or at school. In Fix the agreement mistake
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this
essay, I will explain why I do not agree with this
statement.
Firstly
, letting children watch television on their own would expose them to random content which is not appropriate for their age as well as
getting view problems at an early age . Youngsters will have access to any kind of movies or tv
shows that could have a negative impact on them when they become older. Correct your spelling
TV
For instance
, kids
under 15 years of age have been banned from watching TV
in China. Besides
, experts have done studies that showed that younger viewers’ eyes are more sensitive and will be harmed in the process of staring at the screen. As a result
, these kids
will require glasses when they get older since their vision got
worse because of Wrong verb form
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.
Secondly
, Tv
content has a pure purpose of entertaining and avoiding the process of thinking. Correct your spelling
TV
kids
will have a higher chance of learning more from reading or talking to adults about what is happening in their surroundings than from watching TV
. For example
, a study from 2008 that was done in Canada showed that from the ages 1 to 8 years old, children have proven to learn new topics in school by listening to their teacher and asking questions. In addition
to that, it has been shown that in later years there has increased the number of graduated
students who spent less time watching Change the form of the verb
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TV
.
In conclusion, there are better options for younger individuals when it comes to gaining new information such
as reading, processing and talking about this
content with others. In saying this
, I do not agree with the statement above due to
the fact that teaching happens in those moments that would benefit them better rather than staring at a screen.Submitted by Andrea Barreto on
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