Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree and disagree?
Considering to live in other land has been a trend as it enables increasing the quality of life
moreover
,
if we choose to move from Remove the comma
apply
development
country to the Replace the word
developing
growth
country. Replace the word
growing
However
, moving in
a strange country where you have to speak Change preposition
to
non-mother
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the non-mother
a non-mother
language
can impact serious social issues and practical problems
. In my perspective, these issues can be Correct your spelling
overcome
overcomed
by a great preparation before moving away.
On the one hand, being an outlander is not Correct your spelling
overcome
easy
job if you do not have some excellent secondary Add an article
an easy
language
skills
. First
problem, it will lead to social Change the article
The first
issue
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issues
as
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for
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a human
the human
human
who Fix the agreement mistake
humans
need
to socialize and connect to Change the verb form
needs
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others
other
. It will be stressful if we have to survive in alien land without anybody who could lean us a shoulder and mouth to share Fix the agreement mistake
others
problems
. Furthermore
, in some of
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apply
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the nations
nations
the bullying case is higher because the pupils who come from Add a comma
,nations
other
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another language
other languages
language
could not communicate well in the school. Second
issue, to be independent in the new area, we have to Change the article
The second
be settle
in a job. Unfortunately, the employer prefers to take the employee who could speak Change the verb form
settle
native
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the native
language
as communication is the key for the company. Moreover
, when the basic job is to connect to the customers such
as waiters or company service.
On the other hand
, all the problems
caused by culture
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cultural
difference
could be maintained if the people has already set a good plan before staying over. Fix the agreement mistake
differences
Firstly
, to face the social burden, we might prepare to have a host family to
stay Fix the infinitive
apply
for
several times. Change preposition
apply
This
family might help the Correct your spelling
newcomers
new comers
to socialize in the new habitat in the beginning before they can manage their life. Correct your spelling
newcomers
Moreover
, this
method could be a bridge to make a new friend
as the native people could introduce the new landers to their friends. Fix the agreement mistake
friends
Secondly
, actually
the immigrant people will advantage the employer as they could put Add a comma
,actually
the
lower salary for them. Correct article usage
a
In addition
, some jobs can be applied without any communication skills
, but hard skills
such
as designer
. Many designers might have Add an article
the designer
a
great Remove the article
apply
skill
but Fix the agreement mistake
skills
less
communication Change the quantifier
fewer
skills
but this
is not serious problems
as the art speaks louder.
In conclusion, Fix the agreement mistake
problem
language
is basic
requirement to survive in Add an article
the basic
a basic
the
new society, even though you have Correct article usage
a
plan
before moving away. But Add an article
a plan
language
is the key to be
independent and Wrong verb form
being
settle
in Wrong verb form
settling
the
new place as the top skill that Correct article usage
a
need
to be acquired.Change the verb form
needs
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