Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree and disagree?

Considering to live in other land has been a trend as it enables increasing the quality of life

moreover

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if we choose to move from

development

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country to the

growth

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country.

However

, moving

in

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a strange country where you have to speak

non-mother

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the non-mother

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language

can impact serious social issues and practical

problems

. In my perspective, these issues can be

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overcome

overcomed

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by a great preparation before moving away. On the one hand, being an outlander is not

easy

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an easy

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job if you do not have some excellent secondary

language

skills

.

First

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problem, it will lead to social

issue

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as

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a human

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human

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humans

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who

need

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to socialize and connect to

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others

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other

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. It will be stressful if we have to survive in alien land without anybody who could lean us a shoulder and mouth to share

problems

.

Furthermore

, in some

of

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the nations

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nations

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the bullying case is higher because the pupils who come from

other

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another language

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language

could not communicate well in the school.

Second

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issue, to be independent in the new area, we have to

be settle

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in a job. Unfortunately, the employer prefers to take the employee who could speak

native

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language

as communication is the key for the company.

Moreover

, when the basic job is to connect to the customers

such

as waiters or company service.

On the other hand

, all the

problems

caused by

culture

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difference

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could be maintained if the people has already set a good plan before staying over.

Firstly

, to face the social burden, we might prepare to have a host family

to

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stay

for

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several times.

This

family might help the

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newcomers

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new comers

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to socialize in the new habitat in the beginning before they can manage their life.

Moreover

,

this

method could be a bridge to make a new

friend

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as the native people could introduce the new landers to their friends.

Secondly

,

actually

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the immigrant people will advantage the employer as they could put

the

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lower salary for them.

In addition

, some jobs can be applied without any communication

skills

, but hard

skills

such

as

designer

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the designer

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. Many designers might have

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great

skill

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but

less

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communication

skills

but

this

is not serious

problems

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as the art speaks louder. In conclusion,

language

is

basic

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the basic

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requirement to survive in

the

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new society, even though you have

plan

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a plan

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before moving away. But

language

is the key to

be

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independent and

settle

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settling

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in

the

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new place as the top skill that

need

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to be acquired.