The manufacturing and use of cars damages the environment but their popularity is increasing. Why is this happening? How could this be controlled?

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are considered to be one of the greatest innovations humanity ever created. It's revolutionized how humans

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. It helps us travel the distance that should have taken days in the past to just a few hours. Our society is

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giving priority to convenience and a faster lifestyle,

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is why the popularity of

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were

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increasing.

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, the process of manufacturing and fueling the

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create

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pollution that we

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overlook.

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invention of new technologies and increasing production capacity of many developed nations have made

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more accessible, combined with the society that time was more valuable than ever made the demand for automobiles rise exponentially. With the rising demand for its products ,many

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companies see

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as an opportunity for profit. We have seen many

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companies have a great leap in their value.

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addition of increasing demand and greater production capacity of automobiles ,

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makes the manufacturing of the

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product increased as well.

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, we have to regulate the manufacturing process and the

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of the

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. Because of the pollution its

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. Here are some of the solutions.

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The

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of each nation can create policy encouraging each

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companies

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to manufacture more

eco friendly

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or green vehicles,

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as

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electric

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, hybrid

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, etc.

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method might

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some obstacles,

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type of

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was not accessible to everybody, because the price of it

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in the high range.

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is how inconvenient the

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can be

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,time to charge, there were not many charging locations for electric

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.

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instance

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solution came in. The

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can develop the infrastructure of public transport and encourage more people to use it. We have seen how fully developed public transport can decrease the

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of

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,

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example

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the city of Tokyo has less

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of

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compare

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to Bangkok despite having almost twice the population . Still, the

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must ensure that their public transport system were reliable and accessible to most of the population for

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method to

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the environmental problem created by

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and

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of

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must be dealt with seriously.

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is why I have been convinced that the

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may need to take more direct actions to regulate and improve the condition of manufacture and

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of

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.