Concern for the environment is growing and more and more people are choosing to recycle. But some people suggest that recycling is not enough. They believe we need to consume less. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some
people
believe that recycling is a key
for
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the solution
of
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a global environmental
problem
.
However
, others are convinced that we need to do more. They suggest
to consume
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not so much. Recycling is becoming more and more popular nowadays.
People
think that it will help our environment not to suffer from
the
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human’s
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activity. Due to
this
trend
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a
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number of landfills
is
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decreasing. There is no need for the government to use
country’s
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territory for the landfills anymore. So that it can be given to
people
who can use it for
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agriculture, earning money for living and solving the global
problem
of hunger simultaneously.
On the other hand
, others are
at
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the opinion that recycling is not the solution. Not all parts of the world are ready to recycle. A lot of governments neither have
money
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to build a trash recycling plant, nor the opportunity to teach their citizens how to recycle through some state courses. So that the trend to recycle is not enough because it is not solving the environmental
problem
on the global level. Some
people
think that
overconsumption
is the biggest
problem
which needs to be solved. Clothes, cosmetics,
cars
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are becoming more valuable than the environment’s condition.
Consequently
,
people
become less concerned about
the
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nature and the planet becomes more polluted. If we will deal with
the
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overconsumption
, which is the main source of the global environmental
problem
, it helps to reduce the level of pollution. To summarize, I totally agree with the statement that
overconsumption
is the source of the global environmental
problem
.
Overconsumption
makes
the
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society concerned only about things to buy. They worry more about how they are dressed or which perfume to use
instead
of searching for the solution
of
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the air pollution
problem
or the plastic in the ocean.
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