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Some experts claim that most of the outstanding innovations and breakthroughs have been made by people with a high level of so-called ‘innate intelligence’.   What are the advantages and disadvantages of relying on this theory in order to succeed in life for an ordinary people?

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Some scientists claim that most of the outstanding innovations and discoveries have been made by
people
 with a high level of what is known as "innate
intelligence
” .There
are
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huge
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 number of advantages of
this
 statement, but there is a big disadvantage that demotivates ordinary
people
 to develop and
therefore
 the disadvantages
outweight
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. Due to innate
intelligence
, a
person
 from childhood can demonstrate achievement in areas that interest him or her and discover new opportunities for humanity.
Therefore
, geniuses who succeed in one area are strong in that area
,
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 but weak in other areas of life. According to official statistics, 89
percent
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 of
such
 inventors make discoveries in a certain field
such
 as biology, chemistry, and others.
However
,
on the other hand
, the idea that
people
 with strong innate
intelligence
 are more successful demotivates ordinary average
people
 and does not allow them to grow
further
. If there is an opinion in the world that only a naturally smart and intelligent
person
 reaches heights, other
people
 will lose their motivation to try
further
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 and will shift responsibility from themselves, justifying
this
 with the words that they do not have innate
intelligence
. In conclusion, the theory of innate
intelligence
 has its positive and negative aspects that affect the success of a
person
. Because of
this
, a
person
 should try to develop in all plans, not focusing on only one type of intellect.
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