In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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Nowadays, many new
products
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are created to compete
between
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businesses .
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, the companies have to push their brand by using new ways of advertising. In
this
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essay, I will demonstrate the positive development of advertising
products
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. According to the higher supply, there are many same
products
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with different
brands
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which make producer have to think about how to improve their
brands
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to be outstanding from others. There are various ways to advertise the
products
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such
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as having a trial, creating
booth
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, making
promotion
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promotions
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or hiring popular presenters.
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, creating
the
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apply
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new methods to promote
brands
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can
encouraged
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the
customers
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to buy their
products
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. If the
brands
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made appealing
advertise
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so it would make
customers
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want to use
that goods
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.
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, they can gain new groups of
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that cover
wider
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range of ages as well.
For example
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, the corroborate of KFC (fried chicken company) and Swenson (Ice scream shop) that produce chicken ice-scream. It was
the
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new idea of advertising
product
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a product
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which made many people wonder about how was
it
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its
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taste
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.
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, the feedback was quite well and the income that they got
were
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was
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twice as much as before. In summary, the new innovations
of
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in
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advertising are
the
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positive development which can create higher income and
customers
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to
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for
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that businesses.
This
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makes the
brands
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can grow up rapidly.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • emphasise
  • advertising
  • products
  • innovation
  • competitive strategy
  • consumer dissatisfaction
  • value
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