In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, many new
products
are created to compete
between
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businesses .
However
, the companies have to push their brand by using new ways of advertising. In
this
essay, I will demonstrate the positive development of advertising
products
. According to the higher supply, there are many same
products
with different
brands
which make producer have to think about how to improve their
brands
to be outstanding from others. There are various ways to advertise the
products
such
as having a trial, creating
booth
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, making
promotion
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promotions
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or hiring popular presenters.
Nevertheless
, creating
the
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new methods to promote
brands
can
encouraged
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the
customers
to buy their
products
. If the
brands
made appealing
advertise
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so it would make
customers
want to use
that goods
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.
Moreover
, they can gain new groups of
customers
that cover
wider
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range of ages as well.
For example
, the corroborate of KFC (fried chicken company) and Swenson (Ice scream shop) that produce chicken ice-scream. It was
the
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new idea of advertising
product
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which made many people wonder about how was
it
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taste
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.
Consequently
, the feedback was quite well and the income that they got
were
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twice as much as before. In summary, the new innovations
of
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advertising are
the
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positive development which can create higher income and
customers
to
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that businesses.
This
makes the
brands
can grow up rapidly.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • emphasise
  • advertising
  • products
  • innovation
  • competitive strategy
  • consumer dissatisfaction
  • value
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