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Plastic bags, plastic bottle: and plastic packaging are bad for the environment What damage does plastic do (a mo environment? Whai can be done by governments and Individuals to solve this problem?

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In my ,opinion the government Should Help to grow up culture for does not
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plastic
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 by Giving facilities and they should attempt to live
environment
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 . as you know some people have noT tendency for helping to Keep the
environment
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 by reforming their life and it is entirely hard to change for them ,
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, Government can fix
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 problem By new laws. Another hand,We can don't
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 Of
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 bags When we are going to the shopping or Mall to buy anything
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 as fruit, food, vegetable or even clothes.
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, people are better
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 glass bottles
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instead
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plastic
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 bottles because
plastic
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 is not renewable and
plastic
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 stays in the
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 for many years. I think the government for new and regard laws can help to make a new style of life and people should help by don't
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plastic
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 equipment and
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 of a paper bags or glass bottle . when I go to the Natural attraction I have been a cleaning
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 when I was 20 years. I believe is culture course has nice Earth
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