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Some people believe that we cannot learn anything from the past for our life today, while others believe that history is a valuable source of information to understand human's life. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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It is undeniable that the past source of information is significantly vital for every type of organism on the earth. While some believe that the stats source from the past cannot be learnt since it is pointless, others oppose it and think that historical information is the key to understanding and perceiving human life.
This
 essay will discuss both of these viewpoints and argue in favour of the latter. On the one hand, grasping the data from the past cannot help people proceed forward, which has meant people in the cutting-edge era need to move on from it.
In other words
, around 70 years back
then
 during world war II, everyone well-known
this
 kind of story, the town had collapsed, and over a million folk around the globe passed away, meaning
this
 direful story does not need to be memorable these days because it brings atrocious experience to the elderly crowd who think
this
 is a nightmare and it even causes some person who is very suspiciously gain the disease related to psychology.
On the other hand
, some vital information from the past needs to be stored favourably for researchers, which possibly can be the path for humanity to have a sustainable race. Taking the typical example is that researchers can use
this
 kind of data to tackle the issues around the world
such
 as climate change and can
also
 predict the future disaster by compiling the statistics from the past, leading to awareness of the threat and be the ability to sort out for
such
 scenario. In my opinion, all kinds of historical data should be gathered so that we can perceive some signs of earth and human life, resulting in a sustainable race of humans. In conclusion,
although
 some former stories should not be memorable, I believe that every piece of material from the past is substantially useful for the life of human
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