Convenience food will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional foods and traditional methods of food preparation. To what degree do you agree or disagree ?

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There is an opinion that in the early future old fashion
foods
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will become a rare sort of
food
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and the old fashioned method of cooking
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will be
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forgotten
with them too since modern folk tend to prefer comfortness in selection their
food
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rather than sticking to the old traditional cuisines.
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,
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essay believes with new advancements
of
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the recent era it is more likely will change the traditions like
old
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method
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methods
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of cooking and custom
foods
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themselves will be forgotten eventually. The essay will explain all reasons in detail.
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and foremost,
time
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is the major issue of the 21st century.
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, convenience
foods
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known as Fast
food
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will take over the old custom cuisines.
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means, with the shortage of
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and people's scheduled
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plan
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, fast
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is
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perfect choice. Fast
food
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is available in most
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restaurants and it takes just minutes to get ready. Take canned
foods
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as an example,
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readymade cuisine just takes 5 minutes of preparation. These are enough for a simple decision, saving
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could encourage individuals to
forgeting
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forgetting
the
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traditional
foods
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.
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, the price of the
foods
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still
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one of the major factors when it comes to selecting the
food
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type. Fast
food
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tends to be extremely cheap and
convenience
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. They tend to serve in a huge amount of proportion and cost much cheaper than traditional
foods
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which mostly will serve
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half of the dish and is more expensive.
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, Fast
food
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is easy to consume.
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, the way of eating
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comfort
foodfoods
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food foods
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is simple. on the other side, traditional meals need more attention and take some
time
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to find a way of eating them. In conclusion, there is a belief that convenience
food
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will take over the traditional one,
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similarly
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the cooking methods will change to be more
comfort
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. I
also
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agree with
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notion and I believe, in the
comming
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coming
future traditional
food
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will be forgotten.
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