You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell him how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter •say how you feel about his performance •give details of your musical activities •explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities

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Dear Amy Horner, I am a huge fan of your
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and writing to congratulate you on a brilliant performance at the City Emporium yesterday evening which I am sure everyone enjoyed to the fullest. It was simply breathtaking and electrifying to me and my friends who were
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present at the concert. I have always dreamt of seeing your performance live and yesterday was one of the best days of my life to have the chance for the
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time. I am an aspiring musician and I started playing the electric guitar and drums at a very tender age of 9. I can
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play the flute
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composing a few songs for the band I am involved in. I have been a member of a local
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band called "Window of Dreams" for the
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six years and we primarily focus on playing pop and rock
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. You have always been my idol as a musician and songwriter. I am sure you are busy, but I am hoping that you would share some tips and provide some mentorship to help me do better in
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. I would appreciate it if you can spare some of your precious time to guide me which will eventually be a great help for me to
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enhance my skills and boost my confidence. Thank you very much for your contributions to the
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world. Yours sincerely, Emily Knight
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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