Advertising fast food is good ,do you agree or disagree.

Today advertising is a significant factor

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marketing the products and fast

food

advertising

also

is getting to be a famous trend as many companies tend to advertise their convenience

food

. Some think

this

sort of advertising is beneficial;

however

, in my ,mind

this

practice is not acceptable and could encourage people to obesity and

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unhealthy

food

just because of the advertiser's own profit is a mistake.

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essay will explain the reasons in the

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paragraphs in detail.

First

and foremost, marketing the products which may be

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to humankind should be banned. Fast

food

is one of the unhealthy diets that many already tend to use and advertising

this

kind of

food

gathers more attention of individuals and leads them to consume more unhealthy foods which could lead them to health diseases like obesity.

This

can be more noticeable with minors who may get tricked by fast-

foodfood

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food food

advertisements and spend their pocket money on

this

kind of junk

food

.

Besides

, readymade and fast

food

advertising can empty

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bank

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. Advertising companies know many novel ways to encourage people to eat more junk

food

and giving fake promotions in their advertising leads people to spend their money on buying fast

food

. In the way of example, the new advertisement of Macdonald's is a trap as the advertisement illustrates a huge burger and in the

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reality it is a very small proportion of a meal. to conclude, some think marketing fast

food

is an acceptable action.

However

, I am still convinced that

this

sort of advertisement is just a trick and has a lot of disadvantages