Advertising fast food is good ,do you agree or disagree.

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Today advertising is a significant factor

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marketing the products and fast

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advertising

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is getting to be a famous trend as many companies tend to advertise their convenience

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. Some think

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sort of advertising is beneficial;

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practice is not acceptable and could encourage people to obesity and

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unhealthy

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just because of the advertiser's own profit is a mistake.

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essay will explain the reasons in the

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and foremost, marketing the products which may be

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to humankind should be banned. Fast

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is one of the unhealthy diets that many already tend to use and advertising

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kind of

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gathers more attention of individuals and leads them to consume more unhealthy foods which could lead them to health diseases like obesity.

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can be more noticeable with minors who may get tricked by fast-

foodfood

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advertisements and spend their pocket money on

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kind of junk

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, readymade and fast

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advertising can empty

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bank

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. Advertising companies know many novel ways to encourage people to eat more junk

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and giving fake promotions in their advertising leads people to spend their money on buying fast

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. In the way of example, the new advertisement of Macdonald's is a trap as the advertisement illustrates a huge burger and in the

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reality it is a very small proportion of a meal. to conclude, some think marketing fast

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is an acceptable action.

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, I am still convinced that

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sort of advertisement is just a trick and has a lot of disadvantages

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Task Achievement: 4.5

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4 paragraphs

268 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

convenience
lifestyles
long working hours
prepare meals
Regular consumption
health issues
obesity
heart disease
diabetes
high levels
sugars
fats
salts
economic factors
cheaper
healthier meal options
low-income families
students
cultural influence
global expansion
adapting menus
local tastes
integrating
environmental concerns
packaging waste
carbon footprints
meat production
traditional cuisine
decline
culinary heritage

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