You have just spent a week with a friend on the holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Thank your friend for the holiday, explain that you left your wallet in their house, give them Instructions of how to send it back to you

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Dear Aisha, I hope you and your family are all doing well. It was

such

Linking Words

a great pleasure meeting with you all

last

Linking Words

week on my annual working holidays.

Additionally

Linking Words

, when I returned back to my home I did not find my wallet it was missing from my bag

however

Linking Words

, I thought it was left in your home.

Firstly

Linking Words

, I would like to thank you for

such

Linking Words

a wonderful trip to the different places in my leisure time as well as the most delicious food that was prepared by your mom it was really tasty on the holidays. It was

such

Linking Words

an adventurous experience with you all that I have spent there.

Secondly

Linking Words

, when I reached home just wondering not to see my wallet in my bag and suddenly I thought, at

last

Linking Words

, I was sitting in a living room before I went to the airport.

In addition

Linking Words

, it was colour in black and it's made up of leather fabric and has small pictures of a heart shape so that you could find it easily.

Lastly

Linking Words

, I would suggest you please send back my wallet as soon as possible by means of courier service so that I can collect it from the post office near my house. I look forward to your immediate response. Best Wishes, Yusra

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Linking words
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

217 words

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