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Smacking children is the best form of discipline. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#children #form #discipline
According to many people,
discipline
 is behaving properly and it is achieved only when punishment is given. Some people think that punishing
children
 is the best form of
discipline
.
However
, I completely disagree
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this
 opinion. Smacking
children
 not only
affect
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 their mental growth but
also
 impact their emotional wellbeing. To commence with,
children
 should be taught to talk politely and explain in case
if
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something is wrong. The idea of
discipline
 can not be forcefully taught by beating
children
. If a child shouts, no one is supposed to raise their voice and hands. It will create adverse effects and that child might suffer from mental and emotional problems
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a
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 long term. Another effective way to show
children
to
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be
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discipline
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 is to be
a
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role
model
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. They learn from their
surrounding
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 and what individuals around do can influence
children
's
behavior
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 directly.
For instance
- My friend Aliza respects everyone because she has been seeing her parents behaving appropriately and showing enough respect while talking. To conclude,
children
 are very sensitive so hurting them physically and mentally is not a good choice. They should rather be
self taught
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from
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 parents and their environment.
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