Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.

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from homies for recycling
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authorities
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so sport that.
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issues of
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century like global
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if we don't care about
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for our life and living
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and animals.
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government
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to take some action about
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the same time survive the earth from the neutral effect because that
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of
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about the
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up together to stop the
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position to stop all of the
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of societies .
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